Write about the following topic:
People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.
People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons. Most people have reasons such as career preparations, new experiences, and increased knowledge about the things they like.
The most popular reason for attending colleges or Universities for student is career preparation. Students want to prepare for their career & the best way to achieve that is by receiving guidance with the help of a qualified instructor who are available in the colleges.
They can receive guidance as to which career path they can chose according to their skills and interests or what is the scope of the career they have already chosen and where it will lead to in the future.
Another reason for people to join colleges or universities is to gain new experiences. They can experience what it is like to sit in a classroom and interact with different kind of people. To go on trips with your fellow classmates and enjoy. Preparing for an examination and to go through with it. Sometimes an individual must stay in a hostel away from your home with strangers, who in time will become your friends. One experiences how to become independent and learns how to navigate through the ups and downs of daily life.
Increasing knowledge is another reason for people to attend colleges or universities. Some people have a thirst for knowledge, they always want to learn more and know more. Sometimes people just want to know more about the things they have an interest in and sometimes they just want to know about some random things or facts, just for a change of pace, so that they can get out of their routine life.
There are many reasons for people to attend colleges or universities. It differs from person-to-person on whatever their reason might be. But it's always a good thing to gain more knowledge and experiences. In my opinion attending a college or university is always recommended.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ple attend colleges or universities for many different reasons. Most people have reasons such ...
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Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'choose'
Suggestion: choose
...idance as to which career path they can chose according to their skills and interests...
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Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to accord'.
Suggestion: to accord
... as to which career path they can chose according to their skills and interests or what i...
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Line 4, column 214, Rule ID: FELLOW_CLASSMATE[1]
Message: Use simply 'classmates'.
Suggestion: classmates
...ind of people. To go on trips with your fellow classmates and enjoy. Preparing for an examination...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, as to, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91222570533 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7943424288 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479623824451 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.0999547409 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0555555556 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7222222222 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39211532653 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173128394374 0.084324248473 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.173367338142 0.0667982634062 260% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2425924518 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135105207253 0.056905535591 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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