You should spend about 40 minutes on this task
Write about the following topic-
In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.
What is your opinion about this ?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
The population of our world has reached a record high count of 7 billion, and the number of people is going to keep increasing in the future. This population boom has given rise to another problem, which is the housing situation of the people.
More houses are being constructed for the growing population, however this expansion is resulting in reduction of available land. As there is not much space left within the cities, people are turning towards countryside for making their new abodes.
Some individuals believe that countryside should remain protected. There should not be more buildings or homes constructed in the lush green side of the country. The natural beauty of such a place should not be tainted by the concrete jungle of man.This view is held by the natives of the place and the various environmentalists, who advocate the preservation of nature.
The natives, being the people who have lived in the countryside for their whole lives, do not want the natural beauty of their area reduced.New homes being created will lead to more people arriving, which will lead to crowding. Vehicles will be increased, impacting the air quality due to the emissions generated and the noise pollution . There was a housing society constructed last year in the outskirts of bengaluru, for the development of this society the builder’s raised the agricultural land to the ground and then started construction.There were multiple protests against this undertaking, but it didn’t amount to anything.
In my opinion, the countryside is a beautiful place which should be used sparingly by people as a relaxation visit.But if we start building homes there, we won’t have much of a countryside left for us to enjoy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...he natural beauty of their area reduced.New homes being created will lead to more p...
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...he ground and then started construction.There were multiple protests against this und...
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...aringly by people as a relaxation visit.But if we start building homes there, we wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10638297872 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96040116838 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567375886525 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.4561381826 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.909090909 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6363636364 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244642247392 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094557009097 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650398815799 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137344282344 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591890678699 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.