You should spend about 40 minutes on this task
Write about the following topic-
In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.
What is your opinion about this ?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Food,shelter and clothes are the basic requirments for living a life. But as rural people are migrating towards cities, there is a competition for homes there. Nowdays we can see, there is no much space left for new buildings or houses around us, which results us to settle around country side. Our suburbs are crucial part of our environment, but human beings need roof over there head as well.
According to my thoughts on this issue, we should protect our counrty side, as in process of clearing them, we won't be only cutting trees and bushes but along with them we will be snatching habibat for certain animals and birds. I raise the question why constructing new homes have become such an essential need. I have felt, except population increase, need for own nuclear home is the main cause for this issue. For instance, I have personally seen, people have such huge bunglows but only two people are living in it. This have become a trend, to leave your family home and build a new house.
I believe, if Earth can share space with all kind of species, why we humans cannot share our homes with needy ones. People should be aware about the impact of clearing up the country side and creating new residential areas. It not only effect the ecosystem but create air pollution and noise pollution. We can see the impact of reduction of forests globally, for instance global warming, decrease in rainfall, increase in temperature every year. We can observe that due to exponential rise in buildings and architectures, local birds and animals are very rarely seen around.
To the space issue we are facing, renting, sharing, co-living with friends are few solutions we can try implementing. This is will not only save our country side but we can erase lonliness in our lives keeping our friend close. I strongly supports saving and conserving our suburbs and ecosystem.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 5, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , shelter
Food,shelter and clothes are the basic requirments f...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 190, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...mes there. Nowdays we can see, there is no much space left for new buildings or ho...
^^
Line 4, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... trees and bushes but along with them we will be snatching habibat for certain an...
^^
Line 6, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ople should be aware about the impact of clearing up the country side and creatin...
^^
Line 6, column 238, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[7]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ting new residential areas. It not only effect the ecosystem but create air pollution ...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 240, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'support'
Suggestion: support
...es keeping our friend close. I strongly supports saving and conserving our suburbs and e...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83850931677 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49822281649 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605590062112 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0127631592 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6470588235 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9411764706 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35294117647 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179525922811 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060534057821 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407114841491 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108024055252 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561515880713 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 5, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , shelter
Food,shelter and clothes are the basic requirments f...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 190, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...mes there. Nowdays we can see, there is no much space left for new buildings or ho...
^^
Line 4, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... trees and bushes but along with them we will be snatching habibat for certain an...
^^
Line 6, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ople should be aware about the impact of clearing up the country side and creatin...
^^
Line 6, column 238, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[7]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ting new residential areas. It not only effect the ecosystem but create air pollution ...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 240, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'support'
Suggestion: support
...es keeping our friend close. I strongly supports saving and conserving our suburbs and e...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83850931677 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49822281649 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605590062112 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0127631592 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6470588235 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9411764706 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35294117647 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179525922811 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060534057821 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407114841491 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108024055252 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561515880713 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.