Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane.
Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain:
• where and when you lost your bag
• what your bag looks like
• what its contents were
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you about my hand luggage, that I had left on your plane. I would like your airlines to help in retrieving my lost luggage.
I had taken a flight from London to Vancouver on last Wednesday aboard flight 5EY10. The flight flew from London at 0600 hours and arrived at Vancouver at 1900 hours. During the flight I had kept my bag under the seat and while de-boarding the flight, I collected my luggage from the overhead bins but forgot to collect my bag from under the seat, which I noticed only after I had arrived at my home.
The bag is a regular backpack from American Tourister(Blue Colour). It had a tag with my name and address attached to it, in case someone finds it they can contact me directly using that. And there is a keychain hanging form the side in the form of a shield. The contents include a HP Probook S300 laptop along with it's charger, a powerbank and a pair of sunglasses.
I would really appreciate if my bag would be found and returned to me. If you need any more information don't hesitate to contact me using my mail. Expecting to hear a positive reply from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
Gaurav Upadhyay
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... help in retrieving my lost luggage. I had taken a flight from London to Vanco...
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...he flight flew from London at 0600 hours and arrived at Vancouver at 1900 hours. ...
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...couver at 1900 hours. During the flight i had kept my bag under the seat and wh...
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...urs. During the flight i had kept my bag under the seat and while de-boarding th...
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...flight i had kept my bag under the seat and while de-boarding the flight, I coll...
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... a tag with my name and address attached to it, in case someone finds it they can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52073732719 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49249547898 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7516381491 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.75 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27434587457 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093064021801 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860081006971 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1591829918 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107656688415 0.0580467560999 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.