Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain:
where and when you lost your bag
what your bag looks like
what its contents were
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to report that I forgot my carry-on bag in the overhead compartment.
My name is Bina Nam, and I travelled on the flight from Bangkok to Phuket on December 10th departue time 3 PM. My flight number was AI330 and seat number 3A. When I exited the plane, I seem to have forgotten to take my bag with me. However, I realised my bag was missing only after I reached home. I remember carrying my bag when I boarded the flight and I kept in the overhead compartment right above my seat.
My carry-on bag is a small-red color suitcase from brand ‘Leo’. It is approximately 25 cm x 20 cm. It contains mostly some clothes, a pair of shoes, and few toiletries. In addition, to some documents related to my work.
Could you please inform your lost and found department about my bag. If they have found it, they can deliver it to my home address which I will mentioned below. I will pay the charges for delivery.
I appreciate your taking the time to read my letter. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Bina Nam
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 145, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'mention'
Suggestion: mention
...iver it to my home address which I will mentioned below. I will pay the charges for deliv...
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Line 11, column 54, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...your taking the time to read my letter. I look forward to hearing from you. ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48223350254 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57038315054 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639593908629 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6314546167 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.1875 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3125 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196584947708 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716041077012 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876369084244 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123204065364 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0981780822715 0.0580467560999 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.