Some think increasing business and cultural contact between nations is positive. Others think it leads to the disappearance of the national identity. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.
Globalisation is growing due to the evolution of technology. While it is believed by some individuals that conducting international trade and exchanging cultural values are overwhelmingly positive, others assert that these may cause harm to the unique identification of a nation. There are strong arguements on both sides, which will be discussed now. I, however, side with the former view.
On the one hand, those who contend that the international exchange of trade and culture is negative for a country point out to the danger of the loss of the culture because international trends, such as wearing western clothes, drinking alcohol, and smoking cigarettes, may hold sway on the younger generations. They may eschew their own traditions with western ideologies. Besides, this may also have a detrimental impact on social values. Another downside is related to local businesses. When international corporations enter another country, they may cause native companies to go out of business since global giants are more powerful due to their extensive marketing strategies. For instance, when global food chains, such as McDonald’s and Burger King, was launched in Vietnam, many small family-owned restaurants were closed down due the craze of fast food culture. These reasons, therefore, are considered harmful for a nation.
On the other hand, people think international commercial relationship and culture spread are advantageous beacuse of the benefits accrued by them are by no means negligible. The key benefit is the growth of the economy. MNC’s supports a local economy by paying taxes to the government. Although these MNC’s may be a threat to the health of local companies, they create employment opportunities and forces local business to provide better quality of services so they sustain themselves in the marketplace. The second benefit is that it promotes cultural diversity. People can experience new culture and develop their understanding of the world. It seems that when people are exposed to a variety of culture, they become more tolerant of differences. The more a person gets to know about other countries, the greater the enhancement of his knowledge.
In conclusion, despite the fact that there are a few tradeoffs relating to an increase in international business and cultural contact, they are negligible in comparison to the benefits gained. In my opinion, maintaning strong international ties in form of trade and exchanging cultural norms is the way forward to nourish global peace and unity.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2142.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40909090909 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06379222096 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578282828283 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 671.4 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.756202391 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158906857164 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393112970154 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375555922162 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979222261125 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325044396543 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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