Engaging children in group activities has been pretty common nowadays. While some parents feel that their children should participate in team activities during spare time others feel that children should learn on their own how to invest their time. This essay will discuss why encouraging kids to participate in group activities is beneficial but why one parent should consider allowing her kid to occupy themselves on their own as the best option.
Parents encourage their children to participate in group activities in spare time. Nowadays, most of the families are nuclear. Parents tend to be happy only one child. Being a single child, one become lone and does not learn basic qualities like sharing, caring of others. Moreover, children become self-centered because of such loneliness. As a result, modern day kids does not know the values of compromise, sharing, sacrificing. Encouraging kids to participate in group activities helps them to possess some abstract qualities of how to live happily among others with being unsocial.
Beside encouraging in group activities parents can also let their children to be on their own during free time. By doing this, parents allow freedom and help their kids to be independent. Parents can also observe what their children are attracted by allowing them to invest their free time. According to study, children who are left to utilize their time on their own are more efficient in managing large number of things properly than others. For example, musician A.R Rahman’s parents found he is attracted towards music during his childhood as he tends to keep himself around musical instruments and try to play them. Allowing children to spend their free time on their own not only gives them freedom but also empowers them to tackle things on their own.
Parents are more concerned about how to utilize their children free time into proper ways. This essay discussed that parents can motivate their little ones to participate in team building activities.However, children can also be left alone to utilize their free time based on their choices.In my opinion, I strongly feel that children should be given full freedom to utilize their free time on their own rather engaging in group activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19505494505 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64993996191 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480769230769 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.2852252107 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.055555556 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.492946464001 0.244688304435 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181060140109 0.084324248473 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14264577921 0.0667982634062 214% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.342904555364 0.151304729494 227% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101265013977 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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