It is now medically proved that smoking has a lot of negative impacts on human health. It harms the person, who is addicted to it and also to them who stay closer to the smokers while smoking. This essay will discuss the impacts of smoking in public and also support the decision of banning it in public places.
Smoking is a very personal choice to someone. Everyone has the freedom to take the decision for themselves. A person generally smokes to keep them calm and decrease the mental stress, when there is a lot of pressure at workplace. It may have some health impact but helps them for being focused at them work and also do not impact others directly. And likewise, the work, the place of work can may not be fixed for a few people, like sales and marketing employees. Them may not find a public places to smoke when they need to. So, banning smoking in common areas may be a good decision for those types of people.
Whereas, public places should be accessible to everyone and everybody should feel comfortable at any point of time. Even though a person is not smoking directly, but can get effected by passive smoking from other smokers. It can cause immediate health hazards to people dealing with breathing issues like asthma. We are not supposed to create boundaries to someone’s freedom, however, every individual has to be concern about others when they are in public areas. There could be dedicated places for smoking while keeping restrictions on smoking in public places to keep non-smoking people away from the negative impacts.
In conclusion, smoking causes a lot of health problems to the smoker. Moreover, it also affects the people closest to them. Keeping the above points in mind, it is clear that it has more negative impact on positives. Therefore, I strongly stand with the decision of banning smoking from public places.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 192, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...not only affects the smoker but also to the people around you. This essay will argue why smoking shou...
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Line 3, column 406, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'be'?
Suggestion: be
...scenarios support that smoking need not to be banned at public places but can be move...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, moreover, so, for example, i feel, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86120996441 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54986117738 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508896797153 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8020433627 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392242502273 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155477116615 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923558077699 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274530019879 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466430872263 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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