During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter
remind him when and where you met
tell him what kind of job you are interested in
say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Sir,
Trust you are well.
As an introduction I’m Natasha Bhatia, and to remind you we met in the flight last week from Delhi to London. This letter is in regard to the conversation we had about the opening of your new Indian restaurant in London and your requirement for the chef in the restaurant.
As highlighted in our conversation earlier, I am a chef by profession and looking to relocate in London. The reason why I am looking for the relocation is that my husband has got a good job opportunity there. It reminded me that you were looking for an Indian chef for your new restaurant and I would therefore like to apply for the opportunity considering my past experience.
I am presently working with an Indian restaurant as a head chef and think I would be suitable for the job considering your search for an Indian- origin chef. I am enclosing my resume for your kind consideration.
I look forward to hear from you.
Yours sincerely
Natasha Bhatia
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 361, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...pply for the opportunity considering my past experience. I am presently working with an...
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Line 13, column 378, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rtunity considering my past experience. I am presently working with an Indian re...
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Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...sume for your kind consideration. I look forward to hear from you. Yo...
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Line 21, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...ind consideration. I look forward to hear from you. Yours sincerely Na...
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Line 29, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours sincerely Natasha Bhatia
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, therefore, well, mind you, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8488372093 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88711236245 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56976744186 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0239367984 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10841015604 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560161176929 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375306036668 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760085622225 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355342041302 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.