During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter
remind him when and where you met
tell him what kind of job you are interested in
say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Mr.Brawn,
I am writing to remind you that you told me to contact you after 2 weeks from the day we met.
While we are sitting next to each other, during our way to Melbourne, you lost your ticket and I've found it under my seat, we had several conversations on the route.
One of the conversations, you asked to send my CV your business email, for a job opportunity as an ICT officer at one of your sister companies, and I am interested in taking this position.
This job position meets my requirements and experience, you can check through my CV and attached certificates that I hold. This work fits with my location and as an officer position, where I have enough qualification to manage such responsibility.
I look forward hearing from you, hope we can meet another time for a coffee and have a friendly conversation.
Sincerely yours,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Brawn
Dear Mr.Brawn, I am writing to remind you that y...
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Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
... to Melbourne, you lost your ticket and Ive found it under my seat, we had several ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, while, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 724.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79470198675 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94684871889 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688741721854 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.2191117372 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.666666667 76.5299724578 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 16.8248392259 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20743235648 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879990089556 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064719297493 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119283749756 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573268029637 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 8.37731958763 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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