Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter:
• give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre
• explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community
• describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in regards to your decision about closing a sports and leisure center, in our neighborhood.
My family used to it center many years up until now, my friends and I usually use the sports facilities like gym and Swimming. Should our only sports center will close, it has negatively affect our health; moreover, we couldn’t spend our leisure time especially at weekend.
This center is the only furnished center in our neighbor and if it will close, we should go over an hour to other neighbors to access other sports center, many people had charged annual registration card for sports propose.
As you know, our neighbor has many young people who spend their time in this center; thus, if it close to people might young people fall on unhealthy acidities such as drugs or gangs group.
I look forward to hearing a positive outcome from the council.
Yours faithfully,
Brown
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in regards to your decision about closing a sports an...
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Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'affected'.
Suggestion: affected
...ts center will close, it has negatively affect our health; moreover, we couldn't ...
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Line 9, column 98, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'closes'?
Suggestion: closes
... their time in this center; thus, if it close to people might young people fall on un...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, thus, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92356687898 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51213937776 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656050955414 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.7533512525 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.428571429 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 4.34317383033 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162874360545 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895323965495 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450538798003 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894531163203 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520814256007 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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