You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.In your letter> say where you think you left the papers>explain why they are so

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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.

Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.In your letter

> say where you think you left the papers

>explain why they are so important

>tell the manager what you want him/her to do /her

<p style="white-space: normal;">Dear Sir or Madam,</p><p style="white-space: normal;">I am writing this letter to inquire about some important documents I might have missed after attending the IBM Monthly conference in “IBIS Hotel” on the 6th of this month.</p><p style="white-space: normal;">The meeting held in the banquet hall on the second floor and I am quite sure I have the documents till the second session. During the last session, I wrapped them in a hurry as the driver is waiting to pick me up. I am sure that I missed them in the main hall.</p><p style="white-space: normal;">The documents and notes have important details about the conference and the contact details of the industry leaders. The summary points for all the sessions are also noted down in the same. These documents are very necessary for me since I need to prepare a presentation for my team at the conference that happened, by next week.</p><p style="white-space: normal;">Hence, I request you to ask your staff to do a thorough search all over the main hall, the documents have an ORACLE logo and address printed on it for your reference. In case if you find them, please call me on 0409876567 or you can reach my personal number 9987654321.</p><p style="white-space: normal;">I look forward to hearing from you soon.</p><p style="white-space: normal;">Yours Faithfully,</p><p style="white-space: normal;">Harsha Vardhan</p>

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ...e-space: normal;'>Dear Sir or Madam,

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Line 1, column 1432, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ...te-space: normal;'>Yours Faithfully,

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.91244239631 4.54256449028 130% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.16446988962 2.54303337028 203% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603686635945 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 16.3608247423 220% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.73565992 44.8134815571 310% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 213.833333333 76.5299724578 279% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 36.1666666667 16.8248392259 215% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0906635918376 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424270785192 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447294086399 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906635918376 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.5 8.37731958763 292% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 70.7449484536 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 3.82989690722 339% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 7.45979381443 248% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.59 8.71597938144 202% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 8.62886597938 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 8.54432989691 192% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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