You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
• explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
• say how your work could be done while you are away
• ask for his/her help in arranging it
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Harsha,
I am writing this letter to inform that I will stay in London office for the next six months to support the ongoing production activities of our client and request to arrange the travel and accommodation.
Firstly, as you are already aware that we have successfully completed our project development last month and deployed in live environment. Currently, client in London facing issues in the production and asking us to support them for six months. Due to privacy and data protection policy, I need to present in the client’s country to access the data. So, I am traveling to our head office in London and work from there for the next six months.
However, I will be in touch with our team members through a sprint call every morning and assign the tasks and update the status to you as usual. Since we are currently working for the same client, most of my work will not be halted or disturbed even though I am away.
Lastly, I request you to arrange the flight tickets (date will be sent through email) and cab facilities for the staying period. Also, please arrange the accommodation for 2 people as I am traveling with my family.
Hoping to get a response from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
Harsha Vardhan
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, lastly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61845156156 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6924909784 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9090909091 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249261713252 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884957165834 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06405060161 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120746113468 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526411056096 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.