You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of
flights. You live near the airport.
Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter
• explain where you live
• describe the problem
• give reasons why you do not want this development.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the recent decision taken by Bengaluru airports authority (BAA) to expand the local airport and number of flights.
I am living in Devanahalli village which is located 2kms from the local airport. The primary source of income for people in my village is agriculture. When the initial plan was made to construct an airport, it was agreed that villagers will give the northeastern part of the barren land for the airport construction, since the land is not suitable for agriculture.
But currently, for the airport expansion, the decision has been made to acquire the northern part of the land which is suitable for paddy cultivation. We agree that development is important but not at the cost of agriculture. Secondly, since the runway is closer to our village, we are already facing severe noise pollution. But BAA stated that they are increasing the local flights, if this happens, we will prone to face more health issues due to noise pollution.
So, I kindly request you to understand the concern and publish the news about the problems stated above, so that the government can reassess the possibilities.
Hoping to do the needful.
Thanks,
Harsha Vardhan
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12682926829 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83080698277 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614634146341 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.018729859 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5454545455 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171888638488 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523188659988 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518306994324 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08731613934 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400738666348 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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