Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In recent century, people are preferring most important languages to their tradition ones how that happened to the die out some languages in every year, but I think that is not important in that life will be easier if human just communicate with one or two specific languages
If human just have one or two specific languages that help human to have more communication and improve relationship in world, because all human could transfer their knowledge and attitude with other ones in minimum time which human can increase their speed in development in science and peace. In some multi-cultural countries human are know their traditional languages but they use one special language that they know most important and have key role in their life and children life how they focus their attention to teach their children on that specific language
In the other hand, when human talk to each other’s with one language that help people time to never put on their time on learning English or in expenses a lot for their children to going to international schools, but nowadays many international schools and examiner centers are earn money from poor people in un-development countries how want learning to international language for immigrate or finding better occupation in own countries. Such as many IELTS centers how work in some poor countries like India and Pakistan that have many young people how haven’t opportunity unless immigrate to the western countries.
Finally, human must look forward to forget their un-useful languages to reduce their expenses and time, and human came together to make new world whit one language.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...some multi-cultural countries human are know their traditional languages but they us...
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Line 6, column 284, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'earned'.
Suggestion: earned
...tional schools and examiner centers are earn money from poor people in un-developmen...
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Line 8, column 34, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to forgetting'.
Suggestion: to forgetting
...es. Finally, human must look forward to forget their un-useful languages to reduce the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, so, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17228464419 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7424836293 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520599250936 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 66.0 20.2975951904 325% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 241.512939612 49.4020404114 489% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 345.25 106.682146367 324% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.75 20.7667163134 321% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200285897059 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114571122145 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818250974416 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155910458359 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128448087234 0.056905535591 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.3 13.0946893788 277% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.49 50.2224549098 9% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.0 11.3001002004 257% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.89 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.4 10.1190380762 281% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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