The company you work for is opening a new branch in another country and you would like to work there. Write a letter to your manager and say
– Why are you suitable to work in that country?
– What job would you like to take in the new office?
– Ask about the work to be done in the new branch?
Dear Jack,
In last quarterly meeting, it was updated that our company is expanding its business overseas and new office will be set-up in India. This is certainly a matter of pride for us as we are going to be a multinational company. I am writing this letter to express my interest to work in India.
As you know that I have my roots in India and I did my school education in New Delhi, India as well. Since I completed my elementary schooling from India, I have good command on Hindi language and well converse with the cultures exists in different states of India. Currently I am working as Senior manager – HR and looking after the recruitments for entire United States for our company. Now new office set-up is being planned, the first thing would probably be required is suitable manpower and I believe that I can utilize my HR experience and local knowledge in forming new team.
If company is not planning to recruit HR people initially then I can work in other profile too. Do you have any information about type of work and roles which management has decided to start with? If I get this information, I may plan additional training in order to match the requirements for work.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Best Regards,
Pomp
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Jack, In last quarterly meeting, it was update...
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Line 3, column 585, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nd local knowledge in forming new team. If company is not planning to recruit HR p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, then, well, you know, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1034.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63677130045 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61294564975 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641255605381 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9282354293 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1666666667 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235299082918 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822338202806 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05067527644 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145463291486 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028720296169 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.