the company you work for is opening a new branch in another country and you would like to work there. write a letter to your manager and say
why are you suitable to work in that company?
what job would you like to take in the new office?
ask about the work to be done in the new branch?
dear miss Amanda,
I am John and i has worked in marketing department of our company for 5 years. My current position is sale supervisor of North market of Vietnam. Recently, i known that our company will open a new subdivision of Japan in next year, so i am strongly expected coming to Japan and working there.
I lived in Tokyo Japan for study Master's degree in 3 years and my wife is Japanese that why i can use Japanese like local citizens. In company with 5 years experience in the region of flowers market. I absolutely believe that i am suitable to work in that country.
with 5 years at sale supervisor and managed team include twenty staff with numerous achievement acknowledge by company i hope to work as new branch manager. I assure that i will try my best for developing abroad market of our company in japan.
i hope for hearing from you soon.
faithfully,
john Edward.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Dear
dear miss Amanda, I am John and i has worke...
^^^^
Line 2, column 17, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'i' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
dear miss Amanda, I am John and i has worked in marketing department of our c...
^^^
Line 2, column 159, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'knew'?
Suggestion: knew
...of North market of Vietnam. Recently, i known that our company will open a new subdiv...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 236, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...w subdivision of Japan in next year, so i am strongly expected coming to Japan an...
^
Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... years and my wife is Japanese that why i can use Japanese like local citizens. I...
^
Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...owers market. I absolutely believe that i am suitable to work in that country. w...
^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: With
...i am suitable to work in that country. with 5 years at sale supervisor and managed ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 120, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rous achievement acknowledge by company i hope to work as new branch manager. I a...
^
Line 4, column 171, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rk as new branch manager. I assure that i will try my best for developing abroad ...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...abroad market of our company in japan. i hope for hearing from you soon. faithf...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...abroad market of our company in japan. i hope for hearing from you soon. faithf...
^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Faithfully
...an. i hope for hearing from you soon. faithfully, john Edward.
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 736.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57142857143 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62127991022 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.552382254 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 4.34317383033 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252892119219 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912426301424 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639175367304 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153278205433 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227574748145 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.