An English speaking friend wants to spend a two week holiday in your country and asking for information.
write a letter to your friend. in letter
Offer to find somewhere to stay
Give advice about what to do
Give information about what clothes to bring
Dear Paul,
Hi. Hope this letter finds you in the best of health and prosperity. Yesterday, I got your letter. I am very glad to know that you want to visit my country for a couple of weeks. I am inscribing this missive to inform you about see worth places in my country.
Paul, there is Taj resorts in Delhi which is very near to airport. you can hire a taxi from there which takes only fifteen minutes to reach at the hotel. It is an international resort where you would be familiar with staff as they all are foreigner. While staying at this hotel you need not to worry about safety. You can enjoy each and every amenity in this hotel like swimming pools, theaters and so on. Also, it is cheap priced hotel in the Delhi.
Moreover, there are number of places to visit like historical and religious places. Additionally, it would be a great idea to visit museums which show the history of martyrs of India. I suggest you to not to attend any seminar at hotel which is organised for publicity. More interestingly, in Agra there is a famous building called Taj mahal which is a tourist attraction. It is considered seventh wonder of my country. The sights of Taj are beggars description. picture clicking is not allowed over there. You can visit malls, zoos, lakes and so on.
Lastly, I would like to recommend you to bring woolen clothes as these days it is winter season and temperature is about 15 degree celsius. So bring warm clothes, shoes and sweat shirts. If you require more information, please feel free at my mobile number.
I look forward to hearing from you.
with love,
Anna George.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...in Delhi which is very near to airport. you can hire a taxi from there which takes ...
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Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r with staff as they all are foreigner. While staying at this hotel you need not to w...
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Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worry'?
Suggestion: worry
...hile staying at this hotel you need not to worry about safety. You can enjoy each and ev...
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Line 4, column 463, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Picture
... sights of Taj are beggars description. picture clicking is not allowed over there. You...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: With
... I look forward to hearing from you. with love, Anna George.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, look, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 937.175257732 140% => OK
No of words: 289.0 206.0 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55363321799 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4524842391 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 127.690721649 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595155709343 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 290.88556701 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 12.6804123711 181% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.749214468 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.2173913043 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5652173913 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.86956521739 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.94845360825 253% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0880900764011 0.216113520407 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0258185838424 0.0766984524023 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378587457608 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0531235818101 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550062870444 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.22 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.