Essay topics: A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• give contact details for where you are away
• give instructions about how to care for your pet
• describe other household duties
Dear Jacob,
I hope this letter finds you in good health.I want to thank you for taking the responsibility of looking after my house during my vacations in Bali. I am sure that you will easily handle all the household tasks without any inconvenience. I am writing to inform you about some of the chores that you need to take care of while i am away.
i want to tell you that if you need to contact me for any reason then please don't hesitate to ring me on my mobile. Ive written my phone number on a notepad which is placed on the dining table. currently i am staying at The Lavina Bali Resort but if i changed my hotel, i will definitely inform you about the situation. Otherwise, you can also text me on whatsapp or make a call on skype.
i also want to mention to feed my dog twice in a day in his feeding bowl which you will effortlessly find in the upper drawer next to the refrigerator. Also, don't forget to check the throughout the day that he has fresh water in his bowl.
I would like you to take care of my plants too by watering them. while,the indoor ones in the lounge only need water once in a week, the plants on the balcony require to irrigate daily unless there has been heavy rainfall. Finally, please don't forget to clear my mailbox every day for security purpose and turn on the outside lights when its dark.
I hope that you will not find any difficulties in pursuing these tasks comfortably. I am looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours lovingly
Chris Brown
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...pe this letter finds you in good health.I want to thank you for taking the respon...
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Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r my house during my vacations in Bali. I am sure that you will easily handle all...
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Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...sehold tasks without any inconvenience. I am writing to inform you about some of ...
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Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ience. I am writing to inform you about some of the chores that you need to take care of wh...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...res that you need to take care of while i am away. i want to tell you that if ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...eed to take care of while i am away. i want to tell you that if you need to co...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...eed to take care of while i am away. i want to tell you that if you need to co...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...o contact me for any reason then please dont hesitate to ring me on my mobile. Ive w...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
... dont hesitate to ring me on my mobile. Ive written my phone number on a notepad wh...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Currently
...ad which is placed on the dining table. currently i am staying at The Lavina Bali Resort ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...s placed on the dining table. currently i am staying at The Lavina Bali Resort bu...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...taying at The Lavina Bali Resort but if i changed my hotel, i will definitely inf...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... Bali Resort but if i changed my hotel, i will definitely inform you about the si...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...on whatsapp or make a call on skype. i also want to mention to feed my dog twi...
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Line 7, column 159, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... drawer next to the refrigerator. Also, dont forget to check the throughout the day ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...as been heavy rainfall. Finally, please dont forget to clear my mailbox every day fo...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n on the outside lights when its dark. I hope that you will not find any diffic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 26.3917525773 171% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 283.0 206.0 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3074204947 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35974154878 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 127.690721649 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572438162544 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 384.3 290.88556701 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0958935042 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2666666667 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 2.54639175258 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181375230479 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064250039951 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535721090723 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089183085986 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059652863893 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.