Freshwater has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem.
What are the causes of the increased demand and what measure could governments and individuals take to respond to this problem?
Some countries face scarcity of water. But, this has become a worldwide problem due to water’s burgeoning demand. In this essay, I will illustrate the factors contributing to this trend and then elicit certain steps to control its demand.
There are compelling reasons for rising applications of fresh water. The main reason is the overpopulation in the metropolitan areas. The global phenomenon of urbanization has compounded this demand for water. In addition, since the beginning of industrialization, water has been increasingly used for manufacturing processes such as chemical reactions, cleaning toxic equipments and so on. Moreover, large amounts of water are being used for recreational purposes. For instance, swimming pools at home, theme parks, and resorts use an avalanche of water. Therefore, water scarcity has risen and is now a global problem.
However, certain steps can be taken by governments and individuals to stop the surge in water usage. Firstly, higher prices can be enacted for consuming large amounts of water. In addition, tax deductions may be applicable to those using less. Secondly, governments can invest in the infrastructure and water purification plants to serve the public and organizations. Finally, awareness campaigns can be organized to educate the general public to be stringent in water usage. Consequently, these policies will help in curbing the demand.
In conclusion, the factors contributing to the burgeoning demand for water are due to population explosion in cities, industrial activities and recreational purposes. governments can enact higher prices and tax deductions depending on respective water usage. Also, they can invest in its infrastructure and create awareness campaigns to use less.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Governments
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 32.9175257732 30% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 937.175257732 160% => OK
No of words: 265.0 206.0 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64905660377 4.54256449028 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23972758371 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558490566038 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 290.88556701 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0051044952 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7894736842 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9473684211 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73684210526 4.34317383033 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114063317637 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438433631716 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503355952693 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841550523985 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049636364199 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 70.7449484536 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 8.71597938144 171% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 41.2886597938 196% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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