Teenager should not be allowed to use mobile phone at school
To what extend do you agree with this
With the blooming development of science and technology, mobile phones have become indispensable part of life. Hence, most teenagers carry mobile phones at school. The bone of contention among the people is that the students should not be allowed to carry a cell phone with them in their schools. I strongly believed that the mobile phones should be banned in schools because if children own the phone they may become a victim to cyber-bullying as well as it is a major problem in any learning environment.
Firstly, there is a great deal of cyber-bullying and the nowadays it is leading to a life changing decision such as suicide. Therefore, people have feared that if teenagers have a phone they could become a victim of cyber-bullying. To illustrate, by taking one example a thirteen years old girls was bullied by a boy and because of their conversation she had to attempted suicide. The cyber-terrorism rate is sky-rocking; teenagers with mobile phones are major contributors to criminalization.
Secondly, the major cause of distraction from any learning condition is to have a cellular phone with the adolescents. Hence, they are not capable to get proper concentration on their study. Consequently, they turn to cheat in their exam to maintain their marks. Furthermore, according to a survey, conducted by media association, 75% of juvenile have mobile.
It has been clearly shown that there are numerous topics concerning that child should not be permitted for mobile phone in school. Children that own the phone may become the victim of cyber-bullying as well as it is main reason for distraction from learning. So, if parents want to buy a cell phone to their teenager make sure you take these very important points into consideration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12152777778 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11581791461 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534722222222 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6551383238 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237893943016 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855769063118 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759920828807 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147355074916 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0936524709919 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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