In this era of blooming technology children aged between 2 to 20 are found drenched in the cascade of Internet most of their precious time.
Im strongly in favor of phones not to be allowed at schools at any cost. First and foremost, is the group of children who are hitting their teenage or are already in that vulnerable age in which they should be paying full attention towards their studies and building their best personalities but instead they are consuming all their time in technology so much so that they have totally cut their selves from social lives and parents. Infact, they have hundreds of friends on social media but none in real which as a result makes them severe victims of depression and anxiety which ultimately leads them to certain personality disorder with top on the is suicidal problems.
So, in my opinion, in this tender age they should be strictly forbidden from using mobile phones specially at school hours which could lead to many problems, which includes prioritising their phones and unnecessary calls over studies which created undue distractions. Also in this ear of Internet hacking they could be easily robbed or hacked by some serious hacker which at times cost their lives. Moreover, they pay less time to friends and family which leads them to real social issues.
So, proper check should be maintain on them. Parents should not take this matter for granted and should always keep an extra eye on their children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
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Message: Did you mean 'maintained'?
Suggestion: maintained
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, so, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89919354839 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40083977135 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616935483871 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.0721148993 49.4020404114 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5555555556 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182037624856 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888355274858 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690937127268 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109803424861 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468879580039 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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