Being a celebrity - such as a famous film star or sports personality - brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Being a celebrity or a star has its own perks and privileges. It comes with its own goods and bads. There are certain restrictions and joys in this field.
According to me, if you are under lime light then you don't have a personal life anymore. Because, if you are known to most of the people in the town then they consider it their right to intervene in your personal matters as much as they can. Moreover, media and news play no less role in making sure that none of your personal affairs remain un noticed. Furthermore, they keep on digging in you life more and more, making it more beneficial for their business. Also, in order to make their channel in the front line, they sometimes tweak the truth regardless of the pain and trouble that it would cause the concerned person. For instance, in my country politicians and sportspersons are always under the headlines for some reasons, like our cricketer and prime minister were put under un necessary questions and remarks regarding their married life. Because, for the reason that our cricketer married an Indian and our prime minister married for the third time. Which I think is totally upto them because it is their life, and being famous doesn't give them the credibility to be ridiculed on channels agian and agian. Yet, our media and layman thinks its fair to give their un necessary opinions on their lives. As a result, it un knowingly damages the lives of many peoples around.
On the other hand, if you are famous you get extra attention and favour from everyone around. You are loved and admired by many people, which contributes towards your fan following and you get better chances in the industry. Also, celebrities have better income than a common person because of the work they do. So, they are famous and earns handsomely side by side.
To conclude, the problems outweighs the benefits because sometimes celebrities just want to have normal life like us without being noticed all the time. They have a right to their privacy regardless of their fame.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...restrictions and joys in this field. According to me, if you are under lime light then you d...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e, if you are under lime light then you dont have a personal life anymore. Because, ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ause it is their life, and being famous doesnt give them the credibility to be ridicul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, third, for instance, i think, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75354107649 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40704532916 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558073654391 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5039241188 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3157894737 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5789473684 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26315789474 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200699366331 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590223481312 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646753393075 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119412682082 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00922713066495 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.