Being a celebrity such as a famous film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Being a celebrity is a divine gift and requires considerable talent to standout personality to the world. However, the fame, money and influence that a superstar possesses do not come without a cost. One has to follow a punishing routine in order to get success. We will explore both pros and cons being a famous person.
The most rewarding outcome of being a celebrity is fame. Fans adore and worship their favorite person like a god. Wherever you go, people recognise you and you get unrestricted access to almost everything at your disposal. On the flip side, fame also create inconveniences. Wherever you go, people recognise you and try to pose with you and get your autograph. Celebrities have always on the watch by media and gossip they make often ruins their personal life and freedom.
Furthermore, the most precious thing is respect. People respect and treat you as a role model. People and press follow actions of you and monitor even a slightest move you make. You can be inspirations to millions of people, which is an outstanding experience. At the same time, you have to be very cautious with your private and public behaviour. Respect comes with a high sense of responsibilty and dignity.
Monitory gain is another bright side of achieving success. Successful famous people earn millions with each assignment and can get everything, which money can buy. On the darker side, they have to be wisely spend their money so that at the end career they have sufficient money to live a respectful life. For instance, an Indian actress Saira Bano is currently living in poverty after having a successful career.
To deduce, being a famous celebrity has both pros and cons. It is a gift which a few people get out of millions. With a little inconveniences, I think it has more benefits than troubles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, as to, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89677419355 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73677693115 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577419354839 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2067443791 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.0 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4782608696 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78260869565 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209861096187 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620786941111 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622822336546 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130501576943 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613046753391 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.