Violence in the media promote violence in the society. To what extent do you agree?
Today, the role of media has increased in our lives to a great extent. The direct influence of it is visible in almost every sphere. From fashion to cooking and From education to work, Media has established it's mark everywhere. It wouldn't be incorrect to say that these information transmitting agencies has indeed promoted undue violence over the years. In this essay, I will shed light on the reasons why I am in the total agreement of the given statement.
It is a matter of great concern, as the growing communication agencies broadcasting the news on their respective channels. As it is widely accepted that 'seeing is believing', whatever the news channels showcase in the name of 'breaking news', people consider it a fact, as media is the only source maturity of public rely on. Many countries, where education proportion is not high and people's perspective is not that developed, it is the media that regulates the mind of general public and hence people blindly follow, what they see. This in turn make individuals do what they want to do.
Additionally, entertainment media, present actors of their movies and serials as extraordinary heroes, performing unusual and sometimes out of the way heroic deeds, which gives their fans the liberty to follow them in real life, be it any unlawful activity or taking the law in their hands. Which also gives them a sence of heroic feeling, when they act violently and show disparage against others.
Another way forward, people nowadays depend totally on print or communication media to make themselves aware about the happenings around and are bound to believe them. Media takes the advantage of the same and show an axaggerated version of every news, that leaves a negative impact on a common man, making them either fearful or more violent.
Laconically, media plays a vital and significant role in controlling the minds today and hence it is their utmost responsibility to broadcast and present a factual truth with both the sides and promote peace in society. Government should also intervene and regulate certain checks on the channels promoting violence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06552706553 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76887315525 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603988603989 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4346153721 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.533333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53333333333 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184815986736 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525140253032 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499621759462 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847149998805 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459768946854 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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