Advertisement is one of the easiest ways to inform about a product to a mass population. Although in some cases an ad can be used to represent misleading information about a product, proper use of ads can have a significant positive impact on our lives. As a result, I strongly agree with the viewpoint that advertisements can help us to maintain a better lifestyle.
First of all, ads can be used to promote health products such as new medicines. For example, if a preventive measure for AIDS is invented then ads can play a leading role to disseminate this information all around the world. Furthermore, we saw in the past that television, Internet, and newspaper were used to inform people about SWINE flu which prevented an epidemic. Also, these days ads have been used to inform people about dangers involved in smoking. These ads are placed on the cigarette packets, advertised in the television or FM radio. This is a good use of ads and created an awareness among the people to realize how harmful smoking is and the risks involved with it. Due to this cautiousness, people have started quitting smoking which has contributed to our better health.
Moreover, ads are used to promote advanced products that implement state of the art technologies. For instance, in television and Internet for instance youtube, we see ads for home surveillance systems and Google Home manager. These products can enhance our safety and security as well as can contribute to better living by assisting in managing our homes. Without the advertisements about these products, they would have remained unknown.
In conclusion, there are more advantages than cons of advertisements. Thus, I strongly support the idea that ads can help us for a better lifestyle and healthy practices
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: STATE_OF_THE_ART[1]
Message: Did you mean 'state-of-the-art'?
Suggestion: state-of-the-art
...romote advanced products that implement state of the art technologies. For instance, in televisi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02372881356 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9463653301 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569491525424 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.0039782949 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.625 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.625 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187258401208 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688672278573 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444629494706 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121157508232 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592295045448 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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