Learners from district areas find it tough to acquire university education. Certain people are of view to make university education more accessible. I don't completely agree to this statement because of the quality education being imparted on every level in today's government.
According to me, and what I see in the news and read in papers, present day government is putting a lot of effort and money towards education center of the country specially rural areas. Few decades back people would travel far away from their loved ones to gain gulity education leaving their families alone for lengthy period of time, which only contributed to financial constraints and mental issues, because staying alone far away from family requires a lot of stamina and heart. But, this scenario has changed completely giving rural population 100% chance to get higher education with well qualified professors and faculty.
Moreover, schools and universities are offering handsome amount of salary to trainers and teachers to encourage them to come to such areas in order to impart their knowledge and experience. Hence, more and more educators are opting to provide their services in rural communities irrespective of the distance form urban areas. Therefore, ensuring quality education world wide.
To conclude, education is making overall progress. Both rural and urban areas are benefitting equally. There is no discrimination or segregation on any level weather it is faculties or standard of education. That is why people do not feel hesitant in taking admissions in such universities now.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: don't
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Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35742971888 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79797210941 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650602409639 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.7362681284 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.615384615 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251287458317 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866963637835 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056489659893 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152228503271 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532470104345 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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