Certain people opine that the most effective way to make public health better is by elevating the amount of sports activities. While others are of the view that different steps shall be taken in order to improve public health being. This essay shall discuss both points of views followed by justification to validate my point.
To embark upon, greater numbers of sports activities do impart a major role in improving public health. I will elaborate this point by quoting an example of constructing a swimming pool in our community opposed to the past year when no such development was made. Before adults and children, due to lack of outdoor sports facilities would stay home, spending most of their time in front of mobile phones, desktops or televisions. Therefore, making them lazy and lethargic, this resulted in obesity and many other health issues. But, now after constructing a sports complex which includes multiple game opportunities like swimming, tennis and football, people are coming out of their houses and getting themselves enrolled in different tasks. This is consequently improving their health conditions by building up stamina and toning their muscles along with good cardio activity.
On the other hand, some people think that different steps shall be taken for improvement in fitness. This can include improving standards of sanitary and cleanliness which, can contribute to better health conditions. If people are eating in clean and hygienic places, drinking clean water then they will certainly not fall sick. Moreover, if drains in the city are properly sealed and check and balance is maintained then health being will not be an issue.
In my opinion, cleanliness is government’s utmost priority which cannot be compromised on any level. The only factor which can help us in keeping ourselves healthy is by sports activities. So to conclude, much more attention must be paid to the construction of recreational arenas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26837060703 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79110010027 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645367412141 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2838969147 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0625 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236438057084 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755356882139 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615404179911 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14040298574 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925589317323 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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