In many countries in the world, some people earn extremely high salaries. There are two opinions regarding it. On one hand, people believe that this is good for the country. Others believe that government must not allow salaries above certain level.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Undeniably, society as transformed into a natural part of evolution; as a result, human’s life has facilitated remarkably over the last few years. By the virtue of this, a segment of society advocates that people are getting incredibly magnificent salaries, which can be considered as a favourable factor for a nation, whilst others pinpoint that wages should be distributed widely by the government according to the masses irrefutable measures. In my opinion, restricting someone to earn more might not be the best thing and key arguments pertaining to the same are discussing in the subsequent paragraphs.
To embark with, the pivotal rationale behind the former viewpoint is technology. On account of this, a wide range of gadgets such as phones, computers etcetera have become an impeccable part of modern life’ essence. consequently, people spend their lion’s share of their time on these devices; as a result, people can access knowledge about any topic or event from the corner of the globe which has resulted in splendid skills among them. therefore, people are earning high pay because of being expert and endeavour. consequently, an attractive remuneration package helps people to live an extravagant lifestyle. In addition, the fiscal growth of a country would be enhanced, as highly paid persons can pay an excellently high tax, which is indispensable for the development of a state.
Moving forth, the prime reason behind the latter school of thought is overpopulation. With the mushrooming population and scarcity of resources, survivals are getting difficult evidently. therefore, it becomes the foremost responsibility of the government to invest judicially to provide better infrastructure facilities to the citizens. so, by constraining the amount of wage, regime can utilize funds for improving other basic provisions: medical facilities, better education, excellent job options so on, which in turn, would ascend the prosperity of a realm. Although, wealthy ones can be prevented in term of gaining control with some aspects of society. However, not only it would cause to hinder the performance of the employee in an organization as their hard work would not satisfy their income, but also would lead to mount the crime rate because when nobody would able to accomplish primary needs for themselves, they would commit certain vigorous offences such as murder, mass killing etcetera; as a result the economic and aesthetic value of a nation decrease.
In my perspective, lucrative pay can accelerate the confidence of a worker to do more hard work in their profession, which not only provides an excellent livelihood to an individual but also increase the productivity, which in turn make the effective country’s economy.
In essence, capping salaries is not the solution for income disparity. The government should empower poor people and assist them to earn adequate pay by offering free education and training.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, in addition, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2508.0 1615.20841683 155% => OK
No of words: 462.0 315.596192385 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06898319012 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 281.0 176.041082164 160% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608225108225 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 795.6 506.74238477 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.9980795406 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.333333333 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61111111111 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145873327541 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453085495007 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397751742439 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826751382574 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435962133676 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 157.0 78.4519038076 200% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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