A friend had a newborn baby, you have picked up a present for the baby and want to visit a friend to give it to him/ her . write a letter including the following points.
. congratulation your friend
. Tell him why you picked yo the mentioned present
. suggest arrangments for the visit.
Dear Leela,
I am thrilled to hear that you have given the birth of your first child safely. I saw her pictures on Instagram. She is really adorable. Please accept my heartiest congratulation on this glorious occasion. I am sure she will make you bask in the glory of good future all through your life.
I regret my inadequacy as I cannot meet you early. As a matter of fact, I came to Tokyo to attend an official meeting on Monday. My tasks will occupy me here for another week. I will return to Delhi on 27th October. I am planning to visit you on Friday, the 28th of October, at around 4 p.m. Thus, please let me know if it is convenient for you. In case, you have any other plan on Friday, I can come later as well.
Finally, I cannot wait to see you and your kid. I have already bought a gift for her. I checked out several, eventually, selected a carrycot as I found it quite helpful for a little.
Once again I congratulate you on your well-deserved happiness.
Best Wishes,
Kirti
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 408, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... other plan on Friday, I can come later as well. Finally, I can't wait to s...
^^
Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... I found it quite helpful for a little. Once again I congratulate you on your well-d...
^^^^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... happiness. Yours lovingly, Kirti
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, thus, well, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 837.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5737704918 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6831992218 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68306010929 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7666053921 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.3125 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.4375 16.8248392259 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1875 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171533431302 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536327511887 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389675792481 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098485242716 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178325217997 0.0580467560999 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.04 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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