A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter
• give contact details for when you are away
• give instructions about how to care for your pet
• describe other household duties
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Sam,
I hope you are doing well. I am really glad that you decided to watch over my dog tommy for this weekend. I can’t thank you enough!
I will be back by 6 o’clock in the evening on sunday. While I am in the conference I won’t be allowed to pick up calls on my cellphone, you can call on the hotel reception desk (+1-123456) and ask for me if anything urgent comes up.
Anyways, I am relieved to know that you and tommy are already familiar each other. So that would not be an issue! Still let me tell you about his eating habits, his lunch time is at 11 o’clock in the morning and he loves to have pedigree and milk. He usually watches his favorite cartoon ‘XYZ’ on TV after lunch. Also, we usually go for evening walks around 5 PM.
You don’t need to worry about cleaning and other household chores. I would have already done those before leaving. I will make sure to stack up the fridge with ice creams and chocolates for you before I leave.
I can’t wait to see you.
Best regards,
Tam
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sam, I hope you are doing well. I am really g...
^^^
Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tch over my dog tommy for this weekend. I can’t thank you enough! I will be b...
^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...his weekend. I can’t thank you enough! I will be back by 6 o’clock in the eveni...
^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... weekend. I can’t thank you enough! I will be back by 6 o’clock in the evenin...
^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sk for me if anything urgent comes up. Anyways, I am relieved to know that you ...
^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ally go for evening walks around 5 PM. You don’t need to worry about cleaning a...
^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and chocolates for you before I leave. I can’t wait to see you. Best regard...
^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... chocolates for you before I leave. I can’t wait to see you. Best regards...
^
Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I leave. I can’t wait to see you. Best regards, Tam
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, if, really, so, still, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34715025907 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23060455041 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668393782383 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2259692888 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.5384615385 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8461538462 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148298620031 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525669890642 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319934585991 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859739021852 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221788824743 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sam, I hope you are doing well. I am really g...
^^^
Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tch over my dog tommy for this weekend. I can’t thank you enough! I will be b...
^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...his weekend. I can’t thank you enough! I will be back by 6 o’clock in the eveni...
^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... weekend. I can’t thank you enough! I will be back by 6 o’clock in the evenin...
^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sk for me if anything urgent comes up. Anyways, I am relieved to know that you ...
^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ally go for evening walks around 5 PM. You don’t need to worry about cleaning a...
^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and chocolates for you before I leave. I can’t wait to see you. Best regard...
^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... chocolates for you before I leave. I can’t wait to see you. Best regards...
^
Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I leave. I can’t wait to see you. Best regards, Tam
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, if, really, so, still, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34715025907 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23060455041 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668393782383 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2259692888 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.5384615385 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8461538462 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148298620031 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525669890642 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319934585991 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859739021852 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221788824743 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.