A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter
give contact details for when you are away
give instructions about how to care for your pet
describe other household duties
Dear Sara,
I can’t thank you enough for the favor of looking after my house while I’m in Maldives. Even though it was on short notice, you readily agreed to manage the whole situation. You can call me on 136284652, when I’m away. I’m planning to use this number because it is free of roaming charges. Also, riya@abc.com is my email, in case you are not able to reach me on the phone. I will be occasionally checking my emails, as I have a deliverable soon after the trip.
Tommy, my pet dog will be home. We usually walk him in the mornings followed by his favorite food, biscuits. You can find those on the top rack in the store room. Tommy likes a bath twice a day. All his bath requisites are kept in the cabinet under the washbasin. There are some extra paper towels and cleaning supplies in the store room, in case of any emergency.
The garbage collectors will come once in two days, so you can arrange the plastics and recycling wastes accordingly. Please water the backyard garden on alternate days. Some saplings have just sprung out. Also, don't leave the back door unlocked as Tommy has the habit of pushing the door open.
Thank you so much again and see you soon.
Yours lovingly
Riya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 212, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...me saplings have just sprung out. Also, dont leave the back door unlocked as Tommy h...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, look, so, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56818181818 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31067858803 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672727272727 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6937061085 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.8333333333 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2222222222 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27777777778 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160243080379 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453645038938 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565908880282 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754481347122 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510149635428 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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