A friend has written a letter to you informing about his or her plan to visit your country/city.Write a letter to him/ her. In your letter, write:what he or she can do in your country/cityadvise him about the place he could stay atsuggest him/her what to

Essay topics:

A friend has written a letter to you informing about his or her plan to visit your country/city.
Write a letter to him/ her. In your letter, write:

what he or she can do in your country/city
advise him about the place he could stay at
suggest him/her what to pack and bring while coming to travel to your country/city
You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Norton,

I am so delighted to receive your letter and writing back to say that I am fascinated to have you in my city in a few days. I cannot wait to receive you at the airport!

I guess this is your first-time visit to Italy and I am sure you will enjoy your stay and take back some excellent memories. Once you finish your official tasks in Rome, you can spend a day or two there to enjoy the capital city, especially the Colosseum, Castel Sant'Angelo, St. Peter's Basilica, Trevi Fountain and the Pantheon. You can stay at the Hotel Palladium Palace if your accommodation is not already settled by your office.

Then fly directly to Lucca, the city I am residing in. Give me a call before you reach the airport and I will be there. I would like you to stay at my place as long as you wish. If you insist on staying at a hotel, you can try Villa Corte Degli Dei or Hotel Napoleon. We will enjoy local food, watch a movie and do boating. We can enjoy scenic beauty every evening.

I would recommend you to bring some warm clothes as the winter is setting in. Do not forget to bring your camera to capture the beauty of the rivers and traditional street views. Also, bring any medicines you take.

Looking forward to having you in my city soon.

Warm wishes,

Votes
Average: 8.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... wait to receive you at the airport! I guess this is your first-time visit to ...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, then, i guess

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3640167364 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30465325389 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585774058577 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 329.4 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2235189038 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180334379195 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576623750243 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499236162001 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951883567836 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561252733678 0.0580467560999 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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