A friend wants to spend a four-week holiday in your country and has written asking for advice about the trip. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: offer to find somewhere to stay, give advice about what to do, give information about what clothes to bring.
Dear Suzy,
I am absolutely delighted to know that you have finally decided to come to Dubai for a holiday in December. I am writing this letter to provide you with lodging options as well to give you suggestions for places to visit during your stay. Winter is the right time to visit Dubai as the weather is pleasant. The temperature drops down considerable during the night so please bring a jumper along.
You are more than welcome to come and stay with us for a couple of days. I would highly recommend a stay at ‘Al Maha’ for at least 2 nights as you will be able to experience the desert life there.
Since your kids are young and enjoy adventure, you should visit the crocodile park which is close to where I live. Whilst you are there you can also enjoy a picnic and a guided tour around the park to explore the flora and fauna. I will be working during the week and will be able to drive you to Abu Dhabi on the weekend to enjoy the entertainment at Yas Island. There is also a grand mosque which is a must see.
I am eagerly waiting for your arrival.
Your friend,
Sam
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30097087379 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27354512744 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587378640777 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0460247595 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8333333333 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132519258103 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613160741251 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781776615407 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800319069472 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413460117465 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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