A friend, who lives in another country, has invited to you come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
– thank him/her for the invitation
– explain why you cannot come
– give him/her your other news
Dear Rachel,
Hope you’re doing well. Thank you so much for the invite to Australia for my upcoming holidays. I know you’ve applied for my visa and I can’t thank you enough for your kind gesture. But I regret I can’t accept your invite at the moment.
Unfortunately, I need to tell you that my organization is having a structural change due to which all the sanctioned leaves has been cancelled. In these circumstances, I don’t think it will be right on my part to re-apply for leaves. It’s disheartening but the situation is not in my hand. I hope you understand.
Also, I want to share good news. Soon, I will be promoted to a senior manager designation within the Human Resource department. Hence, I will be organizing a party in Canada and you have to block your dates for the party. Once you are here, we will also plan road trips to the other provinces. I’m really excited to meet you.
Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Best wishes,
Jessica
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, look, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84302325581 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87114545144 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668604651163 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.303987082 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.5333333333 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.4666666667 16.8248392259 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200252903664 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710148829266 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659890646411 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119218159862 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776820037522 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.61 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.