in some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the contemporary world, there are people who opt to stay independent rather than residing with their family. In my opinion, this trend has more detrimental effects. This essay discusses the negative impact of living alone as well as the contribution of a family in one’s life.
To begin with, people often tend to lead a single life due to their work commitments. There kind of people become prone to mental illnesses like anxiety and depression because they do not have anyone to share their emotions. For instance, nowadays youths migrate to different countries in search of job opportunities and most of the time they face ups and downs in their lives by themselves which makes them vulnerable to problem like depression.
On the other hand, albeit staying alone can make a person self-dependent and boost their confidence but it can also make them detached from their family. Moreover, separation disturbs the family life due to which people feel worried and take support of alcohol and other addictions to combat stress and loneliness. To illustrate, many people travel to different locations for work assignments. This has tremendous impact on their personal life as family members can not accompany them for such a long stint.
In conclusion, even though living a solo life has some benefits like becoming self-sufficient and less burdensome for family but it has more adverse effects which often lead to psychological problems as well as it disturbs family life of people. Hence, I strongly believe residing with family is the ultimate option to balance a healthy lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16153846154 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80040149277 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.020572213 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.833333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129515858491 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514983896863 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295000256518 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083333824168 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304935639054 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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