You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Dear Mr. Jacob,
I am writing to seek your permission for a sabbatical of 3 months from job to complete my post- graduation degree in Human Resource from Toronto University.
As you are aware that I have been preparing for my post- graduation studies since last 6 months. However, the time is not sufficient to cop up with all the subjects. I would require few months leave from work to finish my education with flying colors.
Once my academics will be over I shall resume the duty immediately and work over time to compensate my leaves. I regret at the moment I am not in a position to render my services. Hence, I have decided to work on weekends once I join back at work.
My degree in Human Resource Management will not only enhance my skill sets but also it will increase my knowledge to serve the organization well. As soon as, I am equipped with the knowledge of policies and procedures in Human Resource, I will implement it in our company for the future benefits.
Looking forward to seeing your positive response.
Yours sincerely,
Jessica Ayri
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73404255319 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67736602251 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632978723404 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5197304926 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9090909091 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177201006922 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670177268862 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365574567696 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889358263806 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042656030259 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.