Modern technology, such as personal computers and the Internet, have made it possible for many people to do their work from home at least part of the time instead of going to an office every day. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of this situations?
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Doing official work while sitting in the comfort of home has become reality. This has happened due to ever growing personal computing, the World Wide Web and latest technology. In this essay we will discuss about positive and negative effects of working while staying in our residence.
On one hand, there are several reasons. The main factor is less traffic on roads during peak hours. For example, a lot of professionals drive to work everyday for their 9 to 5 jobs which causes a lot of traffic jams. Secondly, there will be a lot of time available to socialize with friends and families. For instance, home office situations save a lot of travelling time which can be easily utilized to meet and greet family members.
On the other hand, we can also observe some negative points. The main reason is less physical activity. For example, there are many employees who prefer walking to work but once they start working from home they will lose the opportunity to walk and maintain their health. Another point is that it would become really tough for organisations to supervise the employees which means it would be stressful for management to keep track of task deadlines and follow up personally with people responsible for the completion of assigned tasks.
In conclusion, everything has good and bad points. Letting people work from home would ease up traffic and leave more time to spend with loved ones, however, it would also lead to an unhealthy lifestyle and difficulties to manage employees. I feel working while we are in our house is good for the environment as well, as there will be a reduction in electricity consumption at our offices. In conclusion, if used wisely, working while sitting at home is indeed a good idea.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88215488215 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62397379326 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2008960553 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.625 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216502835085 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599793244695 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434841081898 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126094756554 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016673037384 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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