The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing.
What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society?
How can this problem be solved?
Obesity has become a major concern in the society. High level of body mass index leads to various diseases. This essay will discuss about the reasons associated with the inclining obesity amongst the people as well as it will suggest some effective solutions to overcome it.
To begin with, one of the main reasons leading to being overweight is the unhealthy lifestyle. Also, being lethargic and unconscious about the health regime can have an adverse effect on the human body. For instance, eating junk food and not exercising regularly increases a tendency to put on weight. In addition, due to lack of awareness about the ill effects caused by the sedentary lifestyle also adds on to being obese. Furthermore, a high level of stress at work and siting constantly for more than ten hours a day is also a major contributor to weight gain.
However, there are viable solutions to eliminate obesity permanently. First of all, mandatory physical activity should be imposed in all the offices. This will also be beneficial to make employees more productive and it will create a healthy environment at work. For example, In India, few companies have gym and swimming facilities in their offices. Apart from this, government should also sponsor free campaigns and organize roadshows to enhance peoples knowledge about the various diseases linked to being overweight.
In conclusion, weighing more has many health issues related to it but there are number of preventive measures through which weight can be controlled and diseases can be kept at bay. Hence, it is always beneficial to keep a check over ones weight.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0977443609 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67363811627 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635338345865 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5317982165 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1333333333 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244607853983 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678063578434 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614464949623 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137030768216 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043688836535 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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