The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing.
What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society?
How can this problem be solved?
Nowadays, Increase in weight gain has a detrimental effect on the overall society which has introduced dangerous health conditions in one’s life. This essay will look at possible causes for this issue and will suggest solutions to overcome them.
There are two main reasons for becoming obese.The main reason for this occurrence is a poor diet because people usually have a busy schedule. Also, this indicates that working individuals often tend to prefer convenience food such as burgers, pizza or pre-packaged meals, which are usually, filled with harmful preservatives. As a result, this leads to higher calorie consumption. The other factor is a sedentary lifestyle, it has often been observed that people spend long hours watching T.V. or browsing through the internet by sitting in one place without any movement for a long (You are not comparing anything here so use – long) period of time. Hence, there is no physical activity taking place which as a consequence, accumulates excessive fat.
It is essential that action is taken to combat these issues. Families should consume home cooked food as these meals can be prepared with fresh ingredients without any additives which in turn fulfill the dietary requirements (we have more than one requirement) of a human body by eating a balanced diet. Therefore, having a healthy meal will boost energy and build a stronger immune system to fight against other diseases. Second, one should at least have some kind of physical activity every day such as, playing sports or exercise as well as restrict the time spent watching T.V.
In conclusion, factors, like eating disorders (Or – an eating disorder) as well as being lethargic, can increase weight. But, nations can defeat this danger by embracing a healthy lifestyle and taking preventive measures in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, second, so, therefore, well, at least, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19932432432 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67543465677 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668918918919 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.2248835185 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.25 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145252496416 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447735610644 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392277694016 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082305463624 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264284153996 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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