A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Thank him/her for the invitation.
Explain why you cannot come
Ask him about other times to visit.
You need to write at least 150 words.
Begin your letter with
Dear...
Dear Peter
Hope this letter finds you're well. I just received your letter last Sunday. I'm glad that you've finally settled everything in Rome, Italy. Thank you so much for inviting me to spend my next holiday at your place. I can't believe you still remember that I've been always dreaming about going there and live for a month to enjoy the historical views.
However, I'm not able to pay you a visit this Christmas. I promised my family I'll fly back to Korea and help my sister with her wedding. I'm thrilled that she's getting married in two months. As the maid of the bride, I'm in charge of her bachelor's party, so I'll have to wait for the next available holiday to see you. I promise I'll videotape everything about the wedding and share with you.
I hope you understand me and I miss you so much. I'll be graduated next March and I'm not planning to work in the following six months after that. Do you have time for me in April then? Let's chat on Whatsapp to figure things out.
Keep in touch.
Lots of love,
Jane
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Peter Hope this letter finds youre well. I just received your letter last ...
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Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... just received your letter last Sunday. Im glad that youve finally settled everyth...
^^
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you've
...d your letter last Sunday. Im glad that youve finally settled everything in Rome, Ita...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... spend my next holiday at your place. I cant believe you still remember that Ive bee...
^^^^
Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
... I cant believe you still remember that Ive been always dreaming about going there ...
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Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...e historical views. However, Im not able to pay you a visit this Christ...
^^
Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...it this Christmas. I promised my family Ill fly back to Korea and help my sister wi...
^^^
Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ea and help my sister with her wedding. Im thrilled that shes getting married in t...
^^
Line 7, column 154, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: she's
...ster with her wedding. Im thrilled that shes getting married in two months. As the m...
^^^^
Line 7, column 216, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...n two months. As the maid of the bride, Im in charge of her bachelors party, so Il...
^^
Line 7, column 256, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...Im in charge of her bachelors party, so Ill have to wait for the next available hol...
^^^
Line 7, column 260, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Ill) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...n charge of her bachelors party, so Ill have to wait for the next available holiday ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 326, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...available holiday to see you. I promise Ill videotape everything about the wedding ...
^^^
Line 11, column 50, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...u understand me and I miss you so much. Ill be graduated next March and Im not plan...
^^^
Line 11, column 82, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...o much. Ill be graduated next March and Im not planning to work in the following s...
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Line 11, column 185, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
... Do you have time for me in April then? Lets chat on Whatsapp to figure things out.&...
^^^^
Line 19, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: ,  
... in touch. Lots of love, Jane
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, so, still, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68062827225 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64252201831 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659685863874 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4261659939 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 2.54639175258 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246370647572 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932536344913 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757888968779 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134533632955 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0964768200142 0.0580467560999 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.2 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.