: A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Thank him for the invitation
Explain why you cannot come
Ask him about other times to visit
Dear Sheeja,
Hope you and your family doing well. I had received your invitation yesterday. First, I like to thank you wholeheartedly for inviting me to stay with you. I am overwhelmed to spend time with you but unfortunately, I am very disappointed after your invitation.
As you know, being a Nurse is arduous to get leave due to these pandemic times. i have already been arranged for my annual vacation since the corona cases are surging here in Kuwait authorities have banned chartered International flights .so it is not possible to travel this year.
I hope you can understand my feelings and if possible, I will arrange my emergency leave at the end of this year, hope you will not be engaged at that time. I will let you know the exact date after a few days.
Hoping to hear from you.
Yours faithfully
Anu
: A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Thank him for the invitation
Explain why you cannot come
Ask him about other times to visit
Dear Sheeja,
Hope you and your family doing well. I had received your invitation yesterday. First, I like to thank you wholeheartedly for inviting me to stay with you. I am overwhelmed to spend time with you but unfortunately, I am very disappointed after your invitation.
As you know, being a Nurse is arduous to get leave due to these pandemic times. i have already been arranged for my annual vacation since the corona cases are surging here in Kuwait authorities have banned chartered International flights .so it is not possible to travel this year.
I hope you can understand my feelings and if possible, I will arrange my emergency leave at the end of this year, hope you will not be engaged at that time. I will let you know the exact date after a few days.
Hoping to hear from you.
Yours faithfully
Anu
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 186, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...with you. I am overwhelmed to spend time with you but unfortunately, I am very di...
^^
Line 8, column 81, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
... get leave due to these pandemic times. i have already been arranged for my annua...
^
Line 8, column 238, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e banned chartered International flights .so it is not possible to travel this yea...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5991680139 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2806786819 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6153846154 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3846153846 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.583077329784 0.216113520407 270% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.222616452795 0.0766984524023 290% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.199045826804 0.0603063233224 330% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276957131088 0.12726935374 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.23801615756 0.0580467560999 410% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 186, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...with you. I am overwhelmed to spend time with you but unfortunately, I am very di...
^^
Line 8, column 81, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
... get leave due to these pandemic times. i have already been arranged for my annua...
^
Line 8, column 238, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e banned chartered International flights .so it is not possible to travel this yea...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5991680139 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2806786819 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6153846154 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3846153846 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.583077329784 0.216113520407 270% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.222616452795 0.0766984524023 290% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.199045826804 0.0603063233224 330% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276957131088 0.12726935374 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.23801615756 0.0580467560999 410% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.