:A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Thank him for the invitation
Explain why you cannot come
Ask him about other times to visit
Dear Sheeja,
Hope you and your family doing well. I had received your invitation yesterday. First, I like to thank you wholeheartedly for inviting me to stay with you. I am overwhelmed to spend time with you but unfortunately, I am very disappointed after your invitation.
As you know, being a Nurse is arduous to get leave due to these pandemic times. I have already been arranged for my annual vacation since the corona cases are surging here in Kuwait authorities have banned chartered International flights .so I believe it is not possible to travel this year.
I hope you can understand my feelings and if possible, I will arrange my emergency leave at the end of this year, hope you can also according to my convenience and I think you will not be engaged at that time. I will let you know the exact date after a few days.
Hoping to hear from you.
Yours faithfully
Anu
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e banned chartered International flights .so I believe it is not possible to trav...
^^
Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nned chartered International flights .so I believe it is not possible to travel t...
^^
Line 4, column 133, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'accord'
Suggestion: accord
...the end of this year, hope you can also according to my convenience and I think you will ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 210, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...k you will not be engaged at that time. I will let you know the exact date after ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 728.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60759493671 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77801241687 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689873417722 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.2643192072 44.8134815571 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.8 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257629013706 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122274555278 0.0766984524023 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077128415621 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148355986117 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119393083675 0.0580467560999 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e banned chartered International flights .so I believe it is not possible to trav...
^^
Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nned chartered International flights .so I believe it is not possible to travel t...
^^
Line 4, column 133, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'accord'
Suggestion: accord
...the end of this year, hope you can also according to my convenience and I think you will ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 210, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...k you will not be engaged at that time. I will let you know the exact date after ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 728.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60759493671 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77801241687 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689873417722 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.2643192072 44.8134815571 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.8 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257629013706 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122274555278 0.0766984524023 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077128415621 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148355986117 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119393083675 0.0580467560999 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.