A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, 1. Thank him/her for invitation, 2. Explain why you can not

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A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, 1. Thank him/her for invitation, 2. Explain why you can not come, 3. Ask him/her about other times to visit.

Dear Butter,

I’m delighted to receive your letter. It’s good to hear that your are adjusting well in your new life in Sydney. From your words, I can vividly imagine how lovely the harbour city. It was such a sweet thought of you for inviting me and offering your place for me to stay.

I would love to come over in December for a vacation but I regret to say that I won’t have much time to spare because of prior commitments. I will be flying to Japan on the first week of the month for business travel. After that, my family have promised to visit our relatives in the province for th Christmas holidays.

How about if I come on February or April next year? I think summer would be a perfect season to visit because the weather will be warm enough to enjoy the beaches of Bondi. Fall would also be an equally great season too!

Let me know your thoughts. I’m looking forward to spending time with you and excited to start booking my flights soon.

Love,
Fly

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, well, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51933701657 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26543591209 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668508287293 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7842272374 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3636363636 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225342359572 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751826842436 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628949582465 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124854403955 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101756352277 0.0580467560999 175% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.