E-commerce has influenced our shopping patterns. While a significant number of people are adapting to the new trend of electronic shopping, there are still many people who are not keen to this new concept and still prefer the old-fashion way of buying food at the supermarket. This essay will discuss the benefits of online food ordering and why the traditional shopping is more superior.
It cannot be denied that internet shopping is becoming the convenient way of doing the time-consuming task of running to a store. Because of the invention online shopping, one can just simply use a single mobile phone application to order grocery items, pay electronically and book a door-to-door delivery. An example of this is Honest Bee, an online based grocery business which offers an end-to-end and hassle-free grocery service at a very minimal fee. As a result, busy people can choose to buy online to save time, energy and money by just clicking away few buttons.
However, the majority perceive that brick-and-mortar stores offer a better customer experience. In fact, grocery goers appreciate the personal assistance and face-to-face interaction with store staff. In addition, buying in person allows one to physically see, touch and smell food produce and vegetables which can be appealing to senses. What’s more, nothing beats the gratification of filling a shopping cart with food items and walking out of a shop with your hands full of grocery bags. For these reasons, online shopping will unlikely exceed the advantages of physically visiting a store.
This essay presented why internet shopping despite its advantages will never parallel the traditional supermarket experience. In my opinion, online or web-based shopping may offer a seamless process but visiting a real supermarket is way better because it doesn’t devoid people of human connection, sensory and emotional experience.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ntages of physically visiting a store. This essay presented why internet shoppi...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, while, in addition, in fact, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08280254777 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69782632258 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59872611465 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4056545971 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198390259042 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065304225039 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539293828596 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125255583507 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672263958182 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.