Dear R,
I’m so delighted to have received your letter. It has been a while since we last catched up and I’m happy to know that you have finally decided to reward yourself with a much deserved vacation. You desperately need some good old relaxation and a getaway trip after long months of hectic work. Since you have asked for my recommendation, I highly suggest that you visit the land of rising sun, Japan.
If you’re planning to take a leave in December, it would be lovely to travel to Tokyo and its neighboring towns. By that time, winter is just about to start and the weather in the capital city will just be mildly cold at about 10’C to 16’C. However, the northern towns will already be freezing ice cold. Coming from a tropical country as ours, I’m sure you have been dreaming of white Christmas and surely you can have an experience of that in Gala Yuzawa Ski Resort. It’s located in Niigata Perfecture which is more or less two hours northeast of the capital by bullet train. Other than the popular skiing, you can also try other winter sports such as snowboarding and sleighing in the town’s powder snow covered alpine slopes. I also highly suggest that you stay there for a night or two and check-in in a traditional Japanese accommodation locally called ryokan onsen where you can have a relaxing hot spring bath after an action packed day in the apres. You don’t need to worry about bringing a skimpy bikini to flaunt because going butt naked is the thing there.
I’ll be glad to help you with planning a detailed itinerary should you decide to go in Japan. Honey, next time please don’t write me a letter, you’re such an old school. Give me a ring at my new mobile number, 091786855xx. Perhaps we can have an afternoon coffee at our favorite cafe.
I’m looking forward to hearing your yes for some latte and sweet pastries. See you soon.
Love,
T
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'winter'.
Suggestion: winter
...nd its neighboring towns. By that time, the winter season is just about to start and the weather ...
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Line 9, column 26, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...orite cafe. I'm looking forward to hear your yes for some latte and sweet pastr...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, so, while, such as, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 937.175257732 173% => OK
No of words: 341.0 206.0 166% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74193548387 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 3.78020617076 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50934562643 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 127.690721649 172% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642228739003 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 290.88556701 169% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.2780690598 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1176470588 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0588235294 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64705882353 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319054957713 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113077031145 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901088820783 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216066831565 0.12726935374 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380701939504 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 41.2886597938 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.