A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
request advise about a gift for his/her family
ask about activities and clothing in his/her country
find out about the food
Dear Jack,
I am writing to say that I want to visit Canada, but I have never been to it. Therefore, I would like to ask some information about the country prior to my flight.
First of all, I need some information about what your parents like. I am concerned about what to bring to them as present, because I am unaware of what is popular in Canada. So it would be nice, if you help my with it. Secondly, I need to know what clothes to include in my luggage. I easily catch a cold, if I wear an inappropriate outfit. I would be grateful, if you inform me about usual garment in Toronto. Finally, I want to learn about traditional cousin in Canada. I have heard that the food in your country is considerably different from that in Kazakhstan. To tell you the truth, I am allergic to milk-made food, that may kill me.
I am looking forward to your reply as soon as possible, as it is necessary for me to know what I can expect in your hometown.
Best wishes,
Tolegen
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34594594595 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57598052704 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.850503297 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.8461538462 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2307692308 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179935976159 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612795084224 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448861721133 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116491235221 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348381695031 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.