GENERAL TRAINING WRITING TASK 1You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter-Explain why you want to take time off work-Give details of the amount

Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing you to enquiry if I could take some time off to study exam for a month.

First of all, I want to hold professional engineer certificate which is vitally important for my career and company's future. I have been studying national exams to pass for five years after I have completed houseworks. If I have more time to master, I will successfully pass them.

Secondly, the exam is going to be held on 20st of June. A month will be sufficent to review and examine study notes which covers skyscapers' design and cost estimastion of industrial buildings.

Finally, Mary Brown, who took maternity leave will have begun working at office hense she could direct my projects which are Star Supermarket Construction and Rainbow 5 star hotel design. If it is not possible, Jess Jessica who is am experienced civil engineer also could handle them while I am away. I hope it will be able to arranged.

Thank you for consideration in this matter.
Yours sincerely,
Mary Brown

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82658959538 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72342069489 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.687861271676 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1666642331 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9090909091 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146074597824 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547607872882 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657338383803 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920276712368 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885559337273 0.0580467560999 153% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.