Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my disapproval for construction of building on community park.
First of all, representative of city council decleared this development on a reality show which was broadcasted on CNN television channel on 20st June. I would argue that the park is vitally important for dwellers, and thus it shouldnot be changed.
Secondly, it is only open area where dwellers can park their vehicles. If blocks on that region had designed with their own parking spaces, it would have become obsolete. It is also a facility Green Hose residence legally consequently construction of a building there will be illegal.
Finally, I would like to suggest you write an article regarding importance of it for community. I also would like to recommend dwellers to contact with their lawyers to take further action to stop building. I hope these steps have been helpful.
Thank you for your time and consideration in this matter.
Yours faithfully,
Mary Brown
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16049382716 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9038076323 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.716049382716 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4808007424 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7272727273 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 4.34317383033 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148024358427 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052608843338 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470758852231 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822675648884 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450057607853 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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