The local council has decided to build a block of flats on the park opposite the place where you are livingWrite a letter to the editor of the local newspaper:- Where did you hear this news and your opinion?- The reason why you protest it- Make suggestion

Essay topics:

The local council has decided to build a block of flats on the park opposite the place where you are living
Write a letter to the editor of the local newspaper:
- Where did you hear this news and your opinion?
- The reason why you protest it
- Make suggestions for what people can or should do to stop the development
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write your address or the address of the newspaper.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to your newspaper to protest about the proposed development of Central Park opposite to where I live. The council has written to us that they have planned to construct a huge 10 storey block of flats from next year. I strongly condemn the plan, so as other neighbors in my area.

This park is the only green place in our area. Our children would lose their playground if council goes ahead with the plan. Moreover, we are running a horticulture business to promote organic vegetables which employ 10 people today. Due to council‘s decision of constructing a giant concrete structure, our business will be shut down, thus people will lose their jobs. I understand a new housing place is required but not at the cost of destroying greener pastures.

If you agree with my opinion, please publish an article in your newspaper about current development. Perhaps, we can ask people by signing a public petition for additional support.

Please take necessary action and feel free to write to me to discuss further, if needed.

Yours sincerely,
Peter Jacob

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Average: 3.3 (3 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'block' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'blocks'.
Suggestion: blocks
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Line 6, column 474, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03825136612 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73514599605 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.732240437158 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7099484915 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8333333333 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145958827364 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451065053663 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483353711892 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0695135310626 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484208187352 0.0580467560999 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.